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Post by ReFreshed on Sat May 29, 2010 5:38 am

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Re: First try.

Post by Pingu on Sat May 29, 2010 6:01 am

Hmm... If your new to this beans then ill give you an 8/10 but not... 4/10

AND btw never put an Made By: On a sig it distracts the whole View of that portion soo much..
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Post by ReFreshed on Sat May 29, 2010 6:14 am

^^

Thank you sir Pingu.
I assure you the next one I make I shall not put a 'made by:'.

[I don't know what font is great for putting your name in. >.<]
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Re: First try.

Post by AdmiralKunkka on Sat May 29, 2010 6:38 am

Kewl~
8/10 :D
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Post by ReFreshed on Sat May 29, 2010 6:44 am

Thanks ADK.

I really can't ask for your help cuz' you use PS. T.T
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Re: First try.

Post by Groovy++ on Sat May 29, 2010 7:13 am

Wow nice for the first try good i love the blending but the splatter distracts everything and the flow must be more noticeable don't put the text up and down put the text near the render. good job
8/10. ill be seeing moar :)
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Post by ReFreshed on Sat May 29, 2010 7:21 am

Thank you Spill~

I'm not really good at picking where to put the texts. rofl.
I'm also not that good at making the flow noticeable. I also had a hard time doing that because the stock I used was Green & some Red. And Sieg was Purple,White,Dark Green, and Black. Had a hard time making him blend too.
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Post by Beta on Sat May 29, 2010 7:34 am

Flow is good, text is not that bad, signature not bad at all.

Flow - 6/10
Text - 4/10
Sig - 8/10
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Overall - 18/30

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reduce the noise, add some depth, don't let your base color get over the other colors.
:)
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Post by ReFreshed on Sat May 29, 2010 7:36 am

Thank you Beta~

Flow ~ Not really good at determining if it's good actually.
Text ~ Can't find good fonts and font placement. [stupid dafont doesn't work with me.]

Also, thanks for the tips. :D [I don't even know my base color there. >.<]
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Re: First try.

Post by Pingu on Sat May 29, 2010 7:44 am

Doreachu use only natural fonts like Verdana and arial those fonts is bets for most signatures.
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Post by Beta on Sat May 29, 2010 7:45 am

The flow is produced by your light source, it should be how your signature is being driven, im sorry bout the dafont thingy, i hope the mods here would post some kind of "10 best fonts" or something
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Post by ReFreshed on Sat May 29, 2010 7:58 am

@Pingu
Who is Doreachu? o.O

@Beta
Ahh, I get it now. I guess I'll work on that then.
And, Yeah. They should put the 10 best fonts. xD
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Re: First try.

Post by Groovy++ on Sat May 29, 2010 6:15 pm

@OFFTOPIC
ok ok >.< ill be adding some fonts but don't ya worry it will be soon

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Re: First try.

Post by LittleWind on Sat May 29, 2010 8:08 pm

O.o Kewl~ 7/10 :)
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Post by ReFreshed on Sat May 29, 2010 9:14 pm

@LW
Thank you LW. =D

@Spill++[Offtopic]
Thank you for that, It will really help me on my newbieness. ^^
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Post by LittleWind on Sat May 29, 2010 10:01 pm

ReFreshed wrote:@LW
Thank you LW. =D

@Spill++[Offtopic]
Thank you for that, It will really help me on my newbieness. ^^
You're always welcome 8D
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